Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?
Since decades, people have been fascinated by imported goods. Some argues that groceries shop should only sell native food items rather than foreign products. In my opinion, this is a good move to give jobs to localities and government must make new polices that could promote in-house articles.
To begin with, shops should only keep products made by local people to them livelihood. It helps in lowering competition from foreign goods and give home business an opportunity to deliver products to consumer as well as connect with them. If more people are buying local product then it will encourage businessmen to enhance quality of their products and increase variety, too. In a country like India, we have a huge population, but people are often amused by imported products on the shelf, which are manufactured in other countries. We must create awareness among people to buy Indigenous products to support jobs of inhabitants.
On the other hand, removing foreign products from shops will not help unless government makes some policies on import of foreign goods. They must put heavy taxation on import, which will be bless in disguise for local manufacturer and will keep them a step ahead in the competition. Government must support local artisans so that they can flood shops with natively produced food articles, keeping in mind the taste and requirement of their target audience.
To conclude, shops and government must work hand in hand to promote utilisation of products manufactured in our country. To my mind, promoting local products helps in generating employment and government can help by importing higher tax on foreign goods. We have a rich past and we can use it revive traditional foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 294, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'revives'?
Suggestion: revives
.... We have a rich past and we can use it revive traditional foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16785714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68034227178 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5407154342 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202499741365 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726987380286 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516655971833 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128803521554 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371819376674 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.