An increase in production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?
Our natural environment, nowadays, have been utterly destroyed due to the expansion in production of consumer products.This essay will discuss some reasons which was responsible for this issue,and some efficient solutions that can prevent this damage to a great extent.
Many factories are growing each day, since the demands for goods reach to the excessive level.The resulting gas emissions from factories may lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on our environment.Futhermore,the enormous areas of rainforests have been cleared in order to make way for these manufactories.In addition, the increasing demands for consumer products is a reason humans exploit the natural resources. Materials such as nylon,or plastic are some factors that contribute to the degradation of environment.
Governments could certainly make more effort to the damage of good's production to the environment.They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. Building these factories near lake or residential areas should be completely banned.They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on luxury products and government campaigns should promote planting more trees.
Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment.Individualsshould try be greener. They can choose products with less packaging and long expectancy. On the top of that, they must reuse and recycle as much as possible so that wastes can be considerably reduced.
In the end, an increase in the manufacture of products has undoubtedly caused great damages to the environment.Goverments and individuals should be aware of the effects of their actions, not only for the sake of the environment, but also for the people living in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, in addition, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6690647482 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67550570215 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.322080712 49.4020404114 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266725398054 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909007624739 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721280088379 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13576312863 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536509403254 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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