Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Many people who served their first prison sentence end up breaking the law again. In this essay, I examine the reasons for this phenomenon and provide practical advices to solve the issue.
The first reason is due to the lack of rehabilitation while in the prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of the correct moral behavior. As a result, the first-time offender is mixed with other criminals, which often strength their criminal intention. The second reason for repeated breach of law is owing to the difficulty in finding employment. As a result, many of them who struggle financially ended up breaking the law again, regardless of the consequence.
Perhaps the most efficient way to solve the problem is to provide better rehabilitation programs inside the prison. Some prisons allow prisoners to take online courses or even pursue a degree. By doing this, law officers can ensure that the convicted can learn useful skills which will hopefully earned employment. The offenders who have gone through proper training can integrate into the society when they are released. Another measure is to enforce better supervision when criminals are released from prisons. Some methods include having regular checks or installing tracking devices on the offenders. Hopefully, this solution can prevent people from commiting crimes since they are so carefully watched.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30341880342 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70216618597 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8057285115 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191656206826 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057490069913 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507231735214 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12991815434 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04618087628 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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