A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.
Now a days, Governments force industrialist to set up new factories and mills in the outskirts due to less space and to avoid loud noises and heavy transportations in the cities. Establishing new industries in suburbs means it would bring jobs opportunities and small business in the locality. However, it required proper planning before construction start in that area. I would like to welcome the Government who planned to build a new plant near our village. But, at the same time, I expect authorities will take care safety and environment measures.
First of all, there must be proper infrastructure for waste system to be developed before any construction starts. We have very beautiful green fields, a river and most importantly local habitats. Authorities should properly migrate local animals and birds to the proper place so that there will be no impact of their breeding. In addition to this they make sure to us that no hazardous waste will be thrown in the nearby river. In short, we believe that authorities will keep in view everything before building this factory in this area.
Secondly we all people of this locality wishes to hire greatest labor force from our area instead bringing technicians and other engineers from the city. Morally, this is our right first to get benefit from this large factory. Consequently it will save the transportation and other overheads expenses for using labor force from our region. Many people from our village are very expert and already doing job in similar industries in the city. Hopefully the factory management will consider our request.
At the end, although, we express our happiness and best wishes to the factory management but in return we expect high level protection to our local ecosystems and environment from the pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, Governments force industrialist to set...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, Governments force industrialist to set...
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Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'hire the greatest'.
Suggestion: hire the greatest
...e all people of this locality wishes to hire greatest labor force from our area instead bring...
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Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...to get benefit from this large factory. Consequently it will save the transportation and oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81628212136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2115636745 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100984064139 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321516923807 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362806726706 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606541246951 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207608169545 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.