Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
The majority of full time employees get hardly time to do exercise when there is a work load and stress of the job in office that actually put an end for exercise in leisure time as well. I, however, believe that it has number of possible outcomes to enter exercise routine in daily life that even plays most significant role to keep the body fit and healthy.
Numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that currently, people have become lazy than past as well as less care about health owing to fast pace of the world. Moreover, many intellectual people hold the opinion that due to escalation of job and education competition people preferences has been shifted into earning money instead of care about health. Along with this, one of the obvious reasons is to be inadequacy of money especially in third world countries wherein people do couple of job to fix their domestic issues. Many a time I have seen to number of people on account of work overload and heavy job description in organization people get enough stress that impacts on their social life which could be the cause of devastation of life. Another reason is that nowadays, vast majority of people have been engaged with various gadgets such as, Mobile, Laptop, Tablet and others.
Furthermore, in order to de-escalate the ratio of health problem government need to spread the awareness of rising issues of health across the country, in which, indulgence of people will increase automatically for resolving health problem. In addition, foremost requirement of the government is to control industrial sector where people are giving there excess time to organization on account of work load that demonstrates bridging of law. Survey depicts that consumption of different electronic items are more than the last couple of decades, where adolescents spend their most of the time with mobiles and laptops as an alternative of physical exercise which is deeply flawed by their parents which should not to overlook children.
All in all, I would like to conclude by saying that keeping health fit and smart is more essential to spend better and healthy life. Whereas, it is the responsibility of government to spread the awareness about health to outweigh the people of the country as well as reduction of diseases from country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'get'.
Suggestion: hardly get
The majority of full time employees get hardly time to do exercise when there is a wor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll as reduction of diseases from country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, third, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04155844156 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67598025003 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3073246876 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.75 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0833333333 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335764306961 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10869474732 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694532663473 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173467215565 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074073315764 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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