learning new language
Nowadays, the vast majority of people travel around the world.on the one hand they believe person should be learned new language to face the globe improvement . Firstly, such as the students who go to the USA could be achieved their target by learning english language in practically reading and writing skills in their assignments. secondly, the refugees who leaved their country due to the war must learn new words to understanding people around them in the road, in the hospital and everywhere they go to .
On the other hand, others believe if a person can speak english for example that will help to travel around the world.
From my opinion I believe that, learning new language is important in somehow . First of all, I used to live in the UK for 6 years . I was have to learn english to live there .
To sum up, most people see it is very fundamental to learning new language
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| 2022-11-14 | thaokim2003 | 56 | view |
| 2020-03-11 | Ahsanjamil | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-30 | Nawal2020 | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...w language to face the globe improvement . Firstly, such as the students who go to...
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Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...nd writing skills in their assignments. secondly, the refugees who leaved their country ...
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Line 1, column 508, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n the hospital and everywhere they go to . On the other hand, others believe if ...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing new language is important in somehow . First of all, I used to live in the UK ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll, I used to live in the UK for 6 years . I was have to learn english to live the...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d to live in the UK for 6 years . I was have to learn english to live there . To s...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... was have to learn english to live there . To sum up, most people see it is very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67307692308 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5392866211 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9225821714 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426971871315 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198661269011 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15452723059 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270722852377 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160966524472 0.056905535591 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.