You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request you regarding the plan of developing a local airport. I am an author and I generally prefer your newspaper to publish my article.
Let me explain the situation, I reside nearby airport in Amrapali building for many years, as the time passed away, I have seen all lot of development here. Although it is beneficial for our community, but the reason for living here far from the city's hustle and bustle not accomplished because of frequently commutation of flights for the whole day that interrupt the peace of people living here.
Besides this, there are one school and super speciality hospital just near the airport,
the development of which implies the destruction of school as well as hospital that result in facing a plethora of troubles for children in order to complete their education and also for the elderly people who are getting treatment here.
It is unanimously favoured by all the members of the society. I request you to publish my concern in your newspaper so that government put immediate attention towards this matter.
I am expecting to take our problems into consideration and publish in the newspaper as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
George
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request you regarding th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11707317073 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.782515307 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643902439024 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3637316992 44.8134815571 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167590556098 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745689909279 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724002554598 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811589001492 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079881611595 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.