Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go on the trip
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Ma'am,
I am writing this letter in order to show my willingness to accompany children on a three day trip to France. My work nature demands me to travel a lot so I don’t get enough time with my daughter. Therefore I thought it would be a great opportunity to spend some quality time with her. Moreover, since I have been to France couple of times, so I may help in many ways.
Firstly, as you know that language compatibility is a real issue in France, so we need someone who could fluently communicate in local language. Since I have been there couple of times, I can speak French very fluently. Secondly, since it is a three day short trip, I could help in short listing main attractions and heritage sites which can be explored in three days. Furthermore, I can take care of all the travel arrangements as I know a local tour and travel company which can give us group discount.
I would like to know the dates on which this trip is being planned as I need to apply for leaves and also whether the accommodation would be provided from school or I have to book my accommodation.
I hope you consider me for this school trip. I am looking forward to it.
Yours Sincerely
JPS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...pos;t get enough time with my daughter. Therefore I thought it would be a great opportuni...
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Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e you consider me for this school trip. I am looking forward to it. Yours Si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in short, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65704661122 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7676488196 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149762834347 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523208526593 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467693508424 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911562842633 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233470654681 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.