A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Jimmy,
I’m so grateful to you for showing your readiness to look after my house and Rocky while I’ll be in UK. I’m writing to guide you a bit about various things to be taken care at the home.
Firstly, you can contact me on the Email address written below. Secondly, you can also send me text messages on my UK number if internet would be out of access during my trip to hills. I’ll try to respond you quickly. Although Rocky is well-trained and mannered dog, you may face difficulty in giving him shower. Actually, he is used to taking shower on alternate days otherwise becomes furious. Moreover, his food packet is placed in the first cabinet of the kitchen; he does breakfast around 7 am.
Besides Rocky, you’ll have to check my mail box everyday since it gets filled with newsletters and advertisements. If you find any mail other than these, place it on kitchen shelf. Please water other plants once a week whereas the plant placed in kitchen window needs to be watered twice a week.
Undoubtedly, you’re life savior; I’m so thankful to you for covering me during my absence.
Love.
Jonny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., you'll have to check my mail box everyday since it gets filled with newsletters a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90355329949 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57557069004 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710659898477 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0432332862 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182246259396 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653376080931 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575751207456 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11695378921 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657917732169 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.