Definitely education plays important role in future success of all of us, that is undeniable fact. Nowadays, in attention technological progress (the thing that have direct bond with knowledge) for success in affair, we have to possess higher education. When we ponder over this issue, we figure out that there is no definitive answer about, whether higher university education leads success in future career or not.
In my opinion, for example if we consider future career as puzzle, university higher education is a important pieces of this puzzle, Although it is necessary for the success of any individual, it alone is not adequate.
But on one hand, undoubtedly, university higher degree will smooth the path for the future. Because today the primary need to enter a new job is having a higher university degree in that subject. for example for being a doctor or an engineer we definitely need to graduate from university about the subject that related to that career. In addition, sometimes one of the conditions for advancement in government jobs and the achievement of a higher degree of management is a higher academic degree. For instance, in my country Iran, you can not be management of public office by only secondary education.
On the other hand, there some career that for being professional and having progress we don’t need to have high university education. In such work having experience, is of particular importance. For example, for a skilled plumber or carpenter we may not need higher education but practical experience is a requirement.
In conclusion, in my opinion having a higher education can help us in the future, but in itself is not a guarantee of success, so there is a need for other skills in addition to higher education. And I should point out that the most important of these are "practical experiences"
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- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of wether the course 80
- Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet While the internet is convenient it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted How far do you agree with this statement 84
- Genetics engineering is a dangerous trend it should be limited To what extent do you agree 52
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... puzzle, university higher education is a important pieces of this puzzle, Althou...
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...versity higher education is a important pieces of this puzzle, Although it is necessar...
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...ee will smooth the path for the future. Because today the primary need to enter a new j...
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...gher university degree in that subject. for example for being a doctor or an engine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0651465798 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00903864608 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508143322476 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1046436917 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126168433876 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541102377427 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467178279363 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770727077228 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458631183805 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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