Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
The food requirement has been soaring these days globally, and the higher population seems to be the prime reason for this surge. Several steps can be taken by the foreign administration in order to serve this need.
To start with, undoubtedly, the food resources are considerably limited. However, there are various nations where the population is increasing at an alarming rate. Having mentioned that, the natural resources of food production are depleting rapidly. Further, human interference to the natural environmental processes exploiting other elements of food. To cite an example, marine life has been vastly impacted by the result of the dumbing enormous amount of plastic waste into the ocean, which in turn reduces the seafood. Not to mention, the sea is the main source of food for the locales on a large scale in many countries
In order to curb this issue, the government should organize the campaign on the methods for birth control for tackling the rising population. Not only this but also through these crusades, the administration could invigorate the people on the consequences of using single-use plastic. Moreover, farming using organic methods should be encouraged as it would not deplete natural resources at a rapid speed such as earth soil. To exemplify, in modern farming ways, the use of myriads of chemical elements is deteriorating the natural fauna of soil on a faster rate which diminishing the scale of agriculture.
In conclusion, the scarcity of food can be tackled by inspiring people to adopt two children approach which would certainly curb the rising population concern, and preserving marine life is another way of making food resources obtainable for the growing demand.
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- Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29454545455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84694994107 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3696943839 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168961220889 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568571696793 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479947213734 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105871194583 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349893930117 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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