A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear Dulal,
hope the letter finds you well. I am very happy that you came to visit on friday, 18th October. you tell in your last letter that you will start your journey at 10 p.m thursday and reach Dhaka at 8 a.m friday morning. Unfortunate, I have to go to office that day because same foreign delegates want to visit our office that and they want to confirm a new project deal with us. But you don't have to worried about this matter. I already tell my neighbour mr. Rahman about you and I gave him my house key so that you do not have any problem to enter my house. after you get off from the train at komlapur station you can find taxi station in front of the main gate. Hire one and tell him to my address to that he can understand where to go and how to go. When you reach here ask mr. Rahman to give the house key. then, refresh yourself and take some rest. I will come from office at 5 p.m in the evening. after returning home we together share a plethora of our past memories and go my favorite restaurant for dinner.
hope you will reach safe and healthy. give regards to your parents.
From love,
Shaimoon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Dulal, hope the letter finds you well. I am ver...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... came to visit on friday, 18th October. you tell in your last letter that you will ...
^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...irm a new project deal with us. But you dont have to worried about this matter. I al...
^^^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not have any problem to enter my house. after you get off from the train at komlapur ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ot have any problem to enter my house. after you get off from the train at komlapur ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n understand where to go and how to go. When you reach here ask mr. Rahman to give t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...e ask mr. Rahman to give the house key. then, refresh yourself and take some rest. I...
^^^^
Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...me from office at 5 p.m in the evening. after returning home we together share a plet...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 961, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memories'.
Suggestion: memories
...ome we together share a plethora of our past memories and go my favorite restaurant for dinne...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...o my favorite restaurant for dinner. hope you will reach safe and healthy. give r...
^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Give
... hope you will reach safe and healthy. give regards to your parents. From lov...
^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egards to your parents. From love, Shaimoon
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20737327189 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03862759312 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5644977343 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7058823529 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11764705882 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295582292231 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864071566753 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701878745491 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223504358582 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611480285293 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.25 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.