A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear brother,
How are you. I hope you are doing well. I received your letter mentioning that you are coming to stay with me. What a pleasure to be your host! I can not wait to meet you soon.
I noticed that you will be in my city in the morning, but, unfortunately I won't be home until the evening. I am afraid you have to find your own way to my home. But do not worry, arrangment for your comming have already been made.
After you arrive the train station, you can go to the south platform and take No 101 bus. After 5 statations you will notice a house with blue roof which is my home. You can take keys from mail box, and enter the house. Once you arrived my home, you can make yourself confortable, take a drink or have a meal.
After I finished my work, I will come back at 8 pm. There will be a football match that evening, maybe I can take some beer home so we can watch the match and have beer? How do you think?
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Di
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ately I wont be home until the evening. I am afraid you have to find your own way...
^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the south platform and take No 101 bus. After 5 statations you will notice a house wi...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...r? How do you think? Looking forward to meet you soon. Di
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0725388601 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09077469563 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5591783262 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.4 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445811515651 0.216113520407 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162453041686 0.0766984524023 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714166643917 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251808980904 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109914670047 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.62 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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