Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills. Discuss both views and give ur opinion
There are people who think that with the advancement in technology the need to learn handwriting skills has vanished. However, others believe that it is an essential skill which must be learnt. I believe it should be learned because it enhances the creativity of people.
Undoubtedly, it is no longer required to master handwriting skills because due to modern technology everything which once was to be written by hands is replaced by typing. Increased number of universities and organizations are solely dependant on computers to print information and notices. Even the students take exam on computers where they have to type the answers and this system is entirely replacing the paper delivered exam system. Therefore, it would be absurd to waste time on learning a skill which would be of no benefit. A report shows that examinations in most of universities are being taken on computers lately.
On the other hand, learning hadwriting skill is crucial. No matter how much the technology advances, it can not entirely eliminate the need of acquiring this skill because it increases the creativity of individuals. The ones who learn and master this skill got the chance to experiment with their writing hence, it would enhance their creative skills. Moreover, it also assist in learning arts and enable one to use pen. If one would not be confident with using pen, it would be difficult for them to use brushes and paint masterpieces. A study was conducted in the US which showed that children who learnt handwriting skills were full of ideas and more creative.
To conclude, although the usage of handwriting skill is becoming obsolete with advances in technology, it is essential as it broadens the mind of individuals and I entirely favor the notion that it is absolutely essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...ncement in technology the need to learn handwriting skills has vanished. However, others be...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...iversities and organizations are solely dependant on computers to print information and n...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the universities') or simply say ''most universities''.
Suggestion: most of the universities; most universities
...it. A report shows that examinations in most of universities are being taken on computers lately. ...
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Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...heir creative skills. Moreover, it also assist in learning arts and enable one to use ...
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Line 9, column 608, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...S which showed that children who learnt handwriting skills were full of ideas and more crea...
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Line 13, column 202, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
... I entirely favor the notion that it is absolutely essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09121621622 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86564361866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9231872069 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246064967497 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876629759154 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699925316712 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158159559878 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747967906824 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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