The world has witnessed a dramatic increase in industrialisation just after world war 2 and has been beneficial to many countries. But inspite of its pros, many people are of the notion that we need to be more cautious of the perils of globalisation.I totally agree to this statement and my reasons for it will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, globalistaion has led to a rapid development in the fields of education, economy and infrastructure. To elaborate, people all over the world now have access to top universities in other countries and a surplus amount if individuals migrate to other countries for better prospects, thus in turn increasing the economic turnover in thier own country. For instance, the indian diasparo in the 80's has created a major impact in todays Indian economy and around 1 billion indians are spread all around the globe and hold high ranks or posts in various administrative, medical and technological fields. In addition, globalisation has helped people from different countries, races and cultures to become much closer.
But, unfortunately globalisation has its oen setbacks. Firstly, various cultures gets infiltrated into the society which loses its distinct identity that separates them from the rest of the world. To explain, the etiquette of a society may be frowned upon by other and may destroy thier sense of morality. For instance, the western culture of wearing swimwear is frowned upon by arabs, likewise the concept of arranged marriage in the east is disgusted by western people. Secondly, globalisation has set english as the universal language which in turn led to extiction of numerous local languages.It has become compulsory to learn English in order to thrive in todays world and the importance and love towards ones own language has comparatively diminished. Thus globalistaion has deliberately led to extinction of various loacal languages and destruction of the uniqueness of ones own culture.
In conclusion, eventhough globalistaion has ushered various countries towardsmodern era it comes along with some major setbacks
- children and teenagers are committing more and more crimes in many countries. why is this happening. How can be stop this or least reduce this crime. 56
- More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages. 61
- Even though globalisation brought benefit to many countries its negative side should Not forgotten To what extent do you agree 78
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30421686747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16219015581 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7130214712 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.461538462 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802669094823 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295095829042 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306193854552 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464573271333 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102616409744 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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