Write a letter to give advice to a friend who lost a job.
Dear Tom
What a pity to know that you feel depressed as you lost your job. Don’t feel upset and try to cheer yourself up, since we all know when a door closes, there are plenty that open!
It is yourself who best know why you cannot stay with the previous job. For any reason, I think it is good now you can have a pause and evaluate yourself to see what your strengths and limitations are. With this reflection, you might get ready for and even get better prepared for a new job.
Life is not all about working. So at the moment you can find something interesting to entertain yourself. Play some sports, and go to some music club, for example. This way you can enrich your social life, and extend your relations that may bring you new opportunities for your potential career.
Finally, follow vacancies columns in the media and do not miss any chances of promising job offers that fit you!
Stay optimistic and luck will find you. Trust yourself and be confident that you are competent and skillful for various jobs.
That’s it for now. Stay in touch and be strong.
Best,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68686868687 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32615099931 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4047844853 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596247684777 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.01980354872 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331456886319 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318280126861 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325625218274 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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