Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Some people argue that in these days and age there are plenty of possibilites for us to choose from, in other words we have more options than our ancestors. In my view this is a correct belief and I completely support this notion.
The main reason that humankind in thesedays can choose from a broader vraiety of options is that, our understanding and knowledge of our surronding has been rose dramaticly and is constantly and exponentialy increasing. Therefore, as we concure the world we are producing more possibilites to reach a same goal. Fore instance now we can travel to any place of the globe, so we are not limited to live in our birth place. As a result of development of cheap and easy communication devices we are able to be informed about the phenomenon happening around the world and so we have more acurate information which brings us more choices.
Another phenomena that increased our choices is democracy which brought us freedom and there no kings or dictators any more to curb choices to some limitted list because he or she decided. An other result of liberal governments is that they are based on rules designed by people and as time goes on there is an instinc in humankind to increase her or his freedom, and freedom means more choices.
in conclusion, at the present time people experience freedom and development in science which brought them an enormouse collection of options and paths to choose from. In my view it is going to be an ongoing trend toward future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77394636015 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73636188042 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1112073064 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129925194212 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504155122776 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369664287211 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773768069057 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268212906341 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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