If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Goals are indisputable part of human life. They provide one with a constant source of what must be look forward to. Achivening them generally provides one with a sense of completeness, a pleasure and a joy. An individual can have many goals: Some for himself, some for his family and friends, and some for the society. However, when it comes to defining what goals are worth toiling our night for, and giving all of oneself towards achieving them, one must consider following points. As you will see while I discuss what goals are worth achievable, and how far one could go without affecting herself and her society, it becomes clear that one cannot go any distance to achieve all of her goals.
First, let us consider what goals are worth achieving. While an individual must have a liberty to define her own goals, the fact that we are a part of big society where everyone could get affected with the doing of the others, we could arguably agree on following: One cannot have goals that either harm herself or the society. Moreover, one cannot go to any distance to achieveing any part of such goals. This looks so simple having said like that. Then why in the reality, we have so many problems. It appears that because of conflicts in what one sees as good for the society is considered bad by the others. Such conflicts give rise to terrorism, where a terrorist group takes a big proud in folowing what they consider to be true, while for the rest of the society, it is completely insensible and pernicious.
Now, let us come to goals that could be found more in everyday's life. As a career choice, one could dream of becoming businessman, or a doctor, or a scientist. These goals are generally beneficial to the individual as well as the society. Least, if they do not do anything benefecial, they do not harm the socity. It folows immediately that one actually could go to quite a distant in achieveing such goals in todays's competitive world. But again, there are limits on what means could be used to achive these goals. The rules are simple and abide by a general fact: Whatever one does to achieve her goals, one must see if the others are getting affected negatively, and if one is harming or impeding others growth. An additional concern, perhaps as important as the previous point, one should really look after herself while achieving the dreams. Inanity and never-giving up attitude only goes to a limit after which the decline in the personal development commences.
Last, consider some bigger goals. For example, limiting the carbon foortprints, and stopping global warming. These are the immediate needs of the society, and hence, should come,if not at the top in everyone's priority list, at least in the list somewhere. Even such goals that appear to be of such noble benefits should have their limitation. For example, one should be wary of rules and regualtions in excoriating big companies that are major drivers of global warming. One cannot just devoide them of their own goals and dreams of running their companies.
In summary, while goals are major driver of personal as well as societal development, everybody as individuals and a society should be mindful of the sphere of other goals, and in moral and ethics in general. I would like to end my disucssion with a quote (Unfortunately I do not remember the author!): Success comes to to those who belive in the beauty of their dreams and goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, in general, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2882.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 596.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8355704698 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5768420105 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479865771812 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 900.0 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2231279897 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862497267259 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282462452099 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331908209952 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0305205538646 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260363883556 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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