technology has made our life more complicated instead of making it better.
The modern society is a blessing of modern technology which actually has adorned our whole daily activities from the most trivial cases to the most complicated ones with its charm. it might seem form the outside that instead of making our daily life complicated, technology actually ameliorates our way of living. I firmly believe to the fact that without the involvement of modern technology, we most probably remained as a boorish individuals just like our ancestor.
Firstly, With the advent of the modern transportation system our communication and way of connecting and mobility has been developed like a boosting rocket. While it might be seemed as a counterproductive phenomenon that with invention of modern vehicles, our comforts haven’t been increased as average time to commute has been increased lately for the rising of traffic jam, it has to be cleared that without modern way of traveling we might not even cross the continent. Moreover, a little bit of discomfort doesn’t actually refute the main aspect of travelling.
Secondly, the information, which we mostly rely on, is one of the developments of technology. From gathering knowledge to banking system, we mostly dependent of the modern system which actually developed to lower our arduous jobs including - searching specific information from a book within a vast library or keeping ledger for every transaction made by bank- instead of making our life complicated. However, a little disturbance, and our whole system might fall apart; but it is nothing but a misconception. To be more specified, the invention of modern software such as Matlab, Microsoft excel, and countless of other, our calculation time as well as precision has been boosted.
Finally, In advancing the human mortality rate, technology has taken a crucial part as it constantly performing numerous unthinkable steps to perform mostly inscrutable process at ease. As the whole system is extremely tedious and time consuming, it is completely asinine to think it makes our life filled with inconveniences for its tiring research. To provide the example, it is mostly common to think of our systematic development of cancer drugs which actually takes incontrovertibly a long period of development and countless of tiresome procedure of rechecking and developing with sacrifice of personal comforts of avid scientists. If the scientists thaught the process as discomforting to them instead of inspiring, we might not be able to reach to the point as we are now.
it is obviously undeniable that in certain cases technology has made our life fraught with complication, the positive sides of the technological development actually changed our whole perspective of thinking it in a tortuous way. To conclude, we actually become who we are right now in mostly for the modern technology.
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- technology has made our life more complicated instead of making it better. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a tortuous way" with adverb for "tortuous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14559368209 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515555555556 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7057518178 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.4375 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249877261395 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842979787179 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896181136468 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153890249472 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698725795761 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.