The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade's coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas which were sold in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
As can be seen from charts, it is evident that sales for coffee tended to grow, while those for bananas witnessed an not only upward but also downward trend.
In 1999, the amount of UK's coffee was sold by 1.5 millions of euros and reached a peak of 18.5 in 2004. A similar tendency could be experienced in the sales for coffee in Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden; as there was a significant rise from 3 to 6, from 1.8 to 2, from 1 to 1.7 and from 0.8 to 1 respectively in this examined period.
In the next 5 years from 1999, sales for bananas in Sweden and Denmark declined slightly from 1.8 to 1 and from 2 to 0.9 respectively. However, in Switzerland, bananas consumption which was paid rose sharply by 32 millions of euros. Moreover, in UK and Belgium, in this time revenue from bananas increased from 1 to 5.5 and from 0.6 to 4 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...grow, while those for bananas witnessed an not only upward but also downward trend...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
... the amount of UKs coffee was sold by 1.5 millions of euros and reached a peak of 18.5 in 200...
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Line 13, column 212, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '32 million'.
Suggestion: 32 million
...sumption which was paid rose sharply by 32 millions of euros. Moreover, in UK and Belgium, in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54748603352 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70138161429 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6757022032 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221761371178 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136836334267 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163741438135 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200211770196 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190618865088 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.