Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with public transportation, buses which are from the Kushaiguda depot.
In detail, I am a resident of Malkajgiri, Hyderabad for more than 25 years now, and for a few months, I am experiencing awful services by the local bus transportation. The buses which have to come from the kushaiguda depot are not running timely, and there are 2 or 3 trips which people are encountering instead of 8 trips per day for which they are unable to arrive at their workplaces on time.
However, this unusual situation has created a lot of crowd in the bus stops for which the way towards kukatpally is blocked for the people who travel on their own vehicles. So, your poor transportation has not only created issues for the customers who depend on your buses but also to the people who do not depend.
I would like to suggest you replace the older drivers with the young and talented ones because they have much energy compared to them and drive faster. Moreover, kindly attach a timetable in our bus stop so that people can follow them accordingly.
I hope your employees may not repeat this type of negligence, and I believe these suggestions could be useful to arrest the problems created.
Yours faithfully,
Divyasree Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to express my stron...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crowd seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of crowds'.
Suggestion: a lot of crowds
...ver, this unusual situation has created a lot of crowd in the bus stops for which the way towa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90178571429 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83450855979 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6932191633 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116037773022 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501852240566 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465945193686 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619811138776 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375171132743 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.