Nowadays it is ubiquitously seen that the fathers are showing interest to stay back at home and look after their offsprings while mothers are working in different sectors. In my perspective, this tremendous change could be because women are strong and are able to succeed in different types of jobs, and this is completely a positive development.
Firstly, women of this modern era are better than men in many fields. This is because they are given the freedom to choose their life and fulfill the dreams of raising the bars of a social belief that men are breadwinners and women have to look after their children and household chores which were practiced a couple of decades ago. For instance, Sania Mirza, a married woman had chosen to represent India in the international badminton competition in 2017 and achieved a gold medal to the country. This was possible because of her husband, a former cricket player of Pakistan who had given freedom and supported her by taking care of their children. Hence, this trend has been accepted by many people around the world because of mutual understanding between the partners.
Additionally, women are sharper than men in academics and are able to stand strong during the interviews for which they are offered higher salaries than men. In order to give a healthier life to their children, men are staying at home and inspiring their children to be active in all the fields. Recently, the HINDU newspaper has reported that Rakhi Chawla, the CEO of ICICI Bank is paid the highest amount for her hard work and dedication, and thus her husband is looking after their children for more than eight years now, which is an inspiration to every woman around the globe.
On the contrary, opponents believe that women should be restricted and make them do household chores instead of giving them the responsibility to make the family financially strong. This might be because they think the mother can show more love and affection to their children than a father which is primarily needed for the upbringing of the children.
To conclude, there are many reasons why fathers are being at home and mothers are becoming the breadwinners for the family and I think it is a positive development in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a positive development in society.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 7.48453608247 401% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 937.175257732 200% => OK
No of words: 380.0 206.0 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92894736842 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62211323923 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 127.690721649 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523684210526 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 290.88556701 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6914654621 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.076923077 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328818531197 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116564866371 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092270245964 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202351838719 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651315478837 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 41.2886597938 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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