The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The given line graph illustrates the number of enquiries received over a six-month period from january to june in 2011 by the tourist information office in one city. The enquiries were received in three ways: in person, by letter/email and by telephone.
Overall, the number of enquiries in person and telephone increased exponentially over the following six months, while that of enquiries by letter/ email drastically reduced. Moreover, the Tourist Information Office had gotten the best of enquiry in the month of June with greatest number.
In January, the figures for enquiries by telephone, by letter and by person were 900, 750 and 450 respectively. From that period the proportion of enquiries by person increased to reach most at 1900 by the end of the period. Similarly the figures for enquiries by telephone fluctuated steeply and reached at 1600 in June. However In contrast, the line for enquiries by person was just above the line of enquiries by in person until mid-february, then gradually decreased to almost 400 by the month of May and continued to stay at the same lowest point by the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quiries received over a six-month period from january to june in 2011 by the tour...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rson, by letter/email and by telephone. Overall, the number of enquiries in pers...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the greatest'.
Suggestion: with the greatest
...he best of enquiry in the month of June with greatest number. In January, the figures for e...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... most at 1900 by the end of the period. Similarly the figures for enquiries by telephone ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ed steeply and reached at 1600 in June. However In contrast, the line for enquiries by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99468085106 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8385074008 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.477971569 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363120517417 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173957568259 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167354102169 0.0843802449381 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306987102815 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158683791001 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.