Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Once people become students, they often talk about their hobbies as well as share their attitudes to all the school subjects. Some people said History is considered more necessary than logical subject while some dissenters express antithetical notion. From my point of view, it is unneeded to stand totally on an issues due to its value.
Science and technology play an significant role in our daily life in every aspect of life. It is obvious to catch an electrical gadget around like cellphones used in communication, laptop for working, car for transportation, or machinery robots completely replaced traditional worker in production chain which gives tremendous contribution in macro economy as well as industrialized revolution. Imagine that if these contemporary knowledge disappeared, it would put an end to civilized society turning back to the Stone Age – A first of human being. Therefore, learning these subjects is a way to inherit and promote persistently advanced wisdom of humanity.
However, to know how to reach these achievement, History may not be obliterated due to the proofs of inheritance synthesized through innumerable period. In simple way, an innovation or an upgrade can not occur unless the latest version or technical are well-known. Furthermore, studying History help children perceive how great people done in the past 21 centuries and how frightful the wars caused in order to found their countries and also present world.
In brief, each subject have the own characteristics and essences. We should not focus on a speciality but forget the remain thing, Otherwise it is struggling to move forward to progressive future and leading to step back in human evolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for working, car for transportation, or machinery robots completely replaced tra...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subjects is a way to inherit and promote persistently advanced wisdom of humanity...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this achievement' or 'these achievements'?
Suggestion: this achievement; these achievements
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32962962963 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05810443633 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714814814815 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8624930113 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177656017825 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543523508572 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481148354908 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906841102233 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527389941694 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.