Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is unquestionable true that job plays a key role in human being life in order to adolescent would select their career line with interest more than immense cash in their job.I am fully disagree with this assertion.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right way.
To begin with,There are plethora reasons behind for this even if there most predominant youth can choose their job nor according their taste although everyone have curious about their passion without any high wage.In facts,youngster should choosing their dream work in their life as well as they can easily focus their on modules while juvenile must brilliant influence their future.
Moving towards, sometime people could selecting their job regarding to high payment so that they has never selected their favorite work in their whole.Moreover, who might stuck or boring feel on their workplace.Last but not the least, when kids have chosen their profession with consciousness either a lot of fun and recreation then they everlasting enjoy their professional fields.
To sum up, offspring should want choose their aim line but also who cannot feel bad neither when might superb impact on future.Thus,person no need big money neither
they have happy their passion line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, in fact, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30097087379 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76324478229 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728155339806 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3371588262 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 273.0 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569752859292 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042827504443 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423551331075 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350423971987 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414141935449 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.0946893788 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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