In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The vegetarian diet has become more and more popular in many states. Despite the lack of protein and several minerals supply to the body, the benefits of being healthier and reducing environmental pollution far outweigh any drawbacks.
A diet that does not consume meat can affect the physical growth of humans. This is because meat can supply a large amount of energy, protein, and essential minerals to support both the physical and emotional activities of people. With insufficient sources of energy provided, some functions of our body may not work properly. For example, if people do not eat beef, they may face a shortage of red blood cells because the body is not provided enough iron to form them. However, I believe that this shortage can be solved by using supplements such as multivitamins tablets to balance the demand of the body.
A healthy lifestyle with a vegetarian diet can improve people’s health significantly. That is to say that eating lots of vegetables can prevent people from obesity, which causes many serious diseases such as diabetes and heart disease. The reason is that a vegetarian diet can avoid overconsumption of food and generating excessive energy, which relates directly to overweight. Moreover, a green consuming habit also reduces waste released to the environment and decreases the CO2 emission, which is released from cultivation. For instance, the University of Guelph recently reported that the percentage of vegetarians suffer from diabetes is only 50% of those who have a conventional diet. It means that a vegetarian diet is a perfect solution to make humans stronger and our planet greener.
In conclusion, although there is a minus point regarding the lack of nutrition, I believe that the great advantages of being vegetarians far outstrip the drawbacks in terms of better health and cleaner environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The vegetarian diet has become more and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92206928201 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1384251923 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210976686363 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651692594019 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403499931679 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10623431711 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286718554822 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.