All cities should devote at least five percent of their budgets to programs that preserve and protect existing parks.
Parks are generally a recreational region that allows communities to socialise, energize and grow together. Parks are certainly beneficial in the growth of a society as it leads to the growth of its citizens in terms of health, psychology and relaxation. However, parks can be considered a “comfort” to an extent as some developing cities may not be able to focus on park developments when facing other more significant problems. Even though, the absolute budget of a city is a crucial factor for park development, I agree with the statement if we are considering developed countries. As such, I believe developed countries should, at minimum, contribute five percent of their budget to support parks.
The major benefit of having parks in developed countries is the environmental benefit itself. By focusing on growing trees and preserving them, the city is essentially guaranteeing a safer future for the next generation. The world is currently engaged with a fierce battle with global warming, and a simple way to be victorious is to plant more trees. Clean air and purification of the atmosphere will then come along with the package of having a bucolic surrounding. The governance of Bangkok city has decided to tackle the current problem of massive air pollution in the city by establishing more parks. The officials believe that the minute dirt particles in the air can be put to the ground through the production of oxygen in the air through plants.
Besides the benefit to the environment itself, supporting parks will lead to the recognition among citizens of diversity in their city. Diversity may not necessarily refer to different cultures living together, but it can also mean different environments existing in one whole system. This apparent “regional diversity” will lead citizens to have an open-mind. They will have a variety to decide from, when they wish to explore the city. A civilisation certainly moves forward when a variety of options in the society are abundant. New York City, the international capital of the world, is considered diverse for many reasons. Its Central Park, along with the option of Times Square, allow New Yorkers as well as tourists to engage in multiple entertainment avenues. Life just becomes more exciting.
The supporting of parks is usually only feasible for developed countries as other countries will have other more important problems to solve. Pakistan may not consider parks to be a significant problem to solve in 2019 for example. The current major debt crisis in the country will cause the officials to focus on clearing the debt as soon as possible. They would, as a result, engage in economical maneuvers rather than employ their resources on comforts for the society.
In conclusion, the benefits of establishing and supporting parks are apparent. Environmental care along with a variety of entertainment options in the city leads a society to become more developed. However, this policy may be suitable to more developed countries due to their higher budgets in comparisons to poorer countries. As such, I support the policy asking for atleast a five percent portion given to parks and recreation in developed nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23166023166 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02700301878 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498069498069 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 859.5 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3306877153 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.37037037 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1851851852 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14814814815 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113876024159 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328169233614 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646770428917 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678721027917 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046855453294 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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