It is argued that teenagers who are not willing to exercise can motivate themselves from Olympic games. In my view, I agree that Olympic can make people to bulk up. This essay will discuss the positive facts about the Olympic to the youths.
Olympic games are proven to be successful at motivating young adults to start exercising. This has made the youths to avoid sedentary lifestyle and get into shape. Even if this person is not fit or confident, the famous athletics can be a good role model for them. Cristiano Ronaldo is a prime example, which his fighting spirit and dedication had proven that you can achieve whatever goals you want, such as, losing weight or even become a athlete like him. This will not only useful for one particular thing but also beneficial in the society or competitive job where fitness is a requirement in some business nowadays.
Exercising would help teenagers to live longer. A research by the US University had shown that 69% of the American citizen's life expectancy had increased significantly since the first Olympic games in 1974. By just watching the Olympic on television, youths would be motivated by athlete's appearance or their achievements such as gold medals. For example, my cousin has lost 30kg of weight after seeing our nation participating in running during Olympics games in 2014. Motivation of the pace gave him the desire to lose the weight.
In conclusion, Olympic is a good precedent for younger generations by the famous athletics and the fact that it can lead them to healthier lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9465648855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68542848254 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648854961832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.302448439 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232131197162 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742142109486 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401581925724 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134373800702 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203424861511 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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