Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that in recent years, the modern life brings many changes and challenges to human lives. While some people discontent with the changes, I would argue that changes provide people with the opportunities for personal fulfillment and spiritual enlightenment.

On the one hand, it is sure for say that doing the same things enables people to have more time and need less effort to complete their tasks or jobs, so many people would like to do the same activities and hate the movement. In fact, it finds time-consuming to undertake the new things or challenges. In addition to this, changes also require people to study or enhance their knowledge and experiences, so the change acceptance is a challenge and difficult for them. Take some married women as an example, some women fear the changes, and knowledge improvement after getting married and delivering babies. They wish to stabilize and have more time to take care of their children and small family.

On the other hand, the changes offer favorable conditions for the improvement and development of people both physically and mentally. Furthermore, they bring us amazing journeys of discovery and challenges. If people overcome challenges, the can achieve the new horizons in their lives. Besides that, any success often request the time and effort, so accepting the changes is a stepping stone to gain the achievement. For instance, many women keep the time for studying, enhancing knowledge, undertaking new jobs to fulfill themselves. As a result, some of them can become famous politicians, scientists, doctors, or gain success in other fields.

In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against the changes, but I believe that the change plays a critical role to the fulfillment and development of people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23711340206 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87666430192 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4581426531 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17137899942 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564879014173 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441589515038 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987442366245 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491075016697 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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