Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could
In my view, upto some extent I agree with this statement, scandals have impact on society that they shift their focus on problems which they generally ignore or does not know about. But, what actually is a scandal? An Scandal is an outrageous event that shows us the bad face of society or actually a bad corner which is ignored many times.
The scandals are actually a bad thing happening in our society which people overlook until it has became a major issue. There are various scandals happening in our society like political scandals, entertainment media scandals, personal scandals which should be given emphasis so as to thrive our next generation with a great ascetic, that is moral character.
Nowadays various cases of scandals are being revealed like casting couch in entertainment media, various political scams like coal scam or crop scam in India and they have showed us the cruel or negative face of the leaders or the persons we admired which make us think twice before trusting any leader nowadays and that does not get limited only upto the leader. But, actually it marks bad impact on the overall political party or the niche they are coming from.
In response to these scandals, various types of movements are being carried out by the society, like "#MeeToo" movement which is focused on the casting couch scandals happening in the entertainment media and has thrown up names of such big people whom we admired a lot. The website like ‘wikileaks’ have shown us the negative dealings carried out by politicians, the politicians like who only come in the ruling for their own selfish purposes,
The social media has been of a huge help in all of this revealing of bad practices. But, leaders haven't stopped here. There are also allegations on social media companies that they steal data of this users and sell them to the leaders to know their political views.
But, people have become vigilant nowadays and they have came to know these type of scandals which have raised voice of people and thus there is a hope that these type of scandals will now get a pause or permanent termination. But, people should not wait for these scandals to happen and we should look into these social problems which we have overlooked to thrive a good society and complete evasion of these kind of issues.
Thus, in my opinion " Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways no speaker or reformer ever could."
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-18 | Juhong Park | 66 | view |
| 2023-07-20 | s.sim | 50 | view |
| 2023-07-20 | s.sim | 50 | view |
| 2023-07-11 | Technoblade | 83 | view |
| 2023-07-11 | Jonginn | 66 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...about. But, what actually is a scandal? An Scandal is an outrageous event that sho...
^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...iety which people overlook until it has became a major issue. There are various scanda...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...scandals which should be given emphasis so as to thrive our next generation with a great...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...wn selfish purposes, The social media has been of a huge help in all of this reve...
^^^
Line 15, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...evealing of bad practices. But, leaders havent stopped here. There are also allegation...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...media companies that they steal data of this users and sell them to the leaders to k...
^^^^
Line 19, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... become vigilant nowadays and they have came to know these type of scandals which ha...
^^^^
Line 19, column 404, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... a good society and complete evasion of these kind of issues. Thus, in my opinion &ap...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, thus, as to, kind of, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92874109264 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63164246404 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489311163895 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0508940435 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.214285714 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0714285714 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242424915105 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100904673678 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172959023936 0.0758088955206 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16121574444 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227062583694 0.0667264976115 340% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.