Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers are still the most important source of news for the majority of people. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
While newspapers continue to be the most common and classic source of information, the Internet tends to be the most relevant and the easiest way to get resent news about world’s current situations. This essays disagrees that newspapers are supreme mean to absorb daily stream of data. First, this position will be proven by the analysys of the speed with which news spread on the Internet. Next, a discussion of diversity of the Internet information will also support the view stated above.
The main reason why news on the Internet are priority is that the latest information is presented via the Internet in a blink of an eye. In other words, it takes minuets to upload the resent information on the news portals. As a result, when a particular event occurs, it could be immediately exposed to public attenion.On the contrast, this is not common for newspapers due to their daily or even weekly publication. This is of utmost importance in a case of natural disasters, terrorist attacks, avia catastrophes, when there has to be an endless stream of renewable information. Take for instance a calamity in Russian mall “Winter Cherry”, when thousands of people were troubled by this horrible event and craved for constant update on the situaton.
Another ground for the Internet to be more appropriate than newspapers is the wide range of news from all over the globe that it provides, while newspapers are focused on local news or limited within the boundaries of a state. This statement implies an opportunity for people to be aware of current global political, economical, environmental situations. To illustrate this example, it is relevant to take my research on International Law. It is impossible to conduct such research relying stcictly on newspapers information, because I have to use up to date information about situation in Syria, Iraq, Ukraine and other countries, which I can easily get on the Internet.
To conclude, it is not reasonable to assume that newspapers are the most important source of information nowdays due to ther inability to present the latest and diverse news and the Internet undoubthtedly overshadows newspapers in that question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while, as to, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15449438202 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01857832625 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530898876404 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5905451106 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.071428571 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252161639734 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841626667979 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646887266877 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168067910139 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278919676262 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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