Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
Get exercise on a regular basis
Eat healthy food every day
Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Having a fit body and calm mental is necessary for everyone because these thing cause people have good feel also they can do better their daily tasks. Personally, though I believe that eat healthy food in during a day is the way which people can use it to have a good physical condition. I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, healthy food cause people do not experience illnesses such as obesity and diabetes. Organic food is the branch of the healthy foods, which has nutrient contents that all of them are suitable for body metabolism; therefor we should use them in our cooking. In the following, I write about a story that shows significant of healthy food. When I went to school every day my mom was cooked delicious lunch for me. Most of time my mom’s food had a fresh vegetable, which this work caused I had a fit body that on time. Actually, vegetables can help to stomach has a good digest process and this cycle cause the body eliminate extra fat from the body. Years go by, still I have the perfect body condition, but these days I eat extra sugar which probably makes an unstable blood pressure in the future. This example demonstrates meals that contain healthy nutrients can help body has a good situation.
Secondly, each healthy food has a suitable range of sugar, protein, carbohydrate and such in. The sugar plays a critical role in energy, actually when a range of sugar is very high in the body, our organs can do tasks very well, but when the span of it is low in the body our brain cannot organize tasks. The healthy food has a natural sugar, otherwise unhealthy food has a synthetic sugar which is very detrimental for body. I decide to shows a personal history, which describes the important role of natural sugar. Two years ago I had final exam, so I had stress because I cannot study very more. The morning of the exam I ate simple breakfast which had no nutritional value, moreover I could not sleep very well. In the exam I felt weakness, and I could not continue to answers. Immediately I went to a doctor and he said me ‘you should eat foods which has a natural sugar because these foods are healthy foods’. Later, I found that food has an artificial sugar is harmful because this food actually is false food. As you can see, having an appropriate condition requires eating healthy food.
In conclusion, maintaining a health of body requires a proper diet which compose healthy foods. This is because eating wholesome food prevents serious illnesses, and because healthy food makes an enough energy for body which cause body has a convenient condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, healthy food cause people...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'show'.
Suggestion: show
... very detrimental for body. I decide to shows a personal history, which describes the...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'answer'.
Suggestion: answer
...t weakness, and I could not continue to answers. Immediately I went to a doctor and he ...
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Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
.... Immediately I went to a doctor and he said me 'you should eat foods which has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66595744681 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49775725568 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493617021277 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5206521577 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.347826087 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173130954152 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632350168643 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619804947254 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133300943248 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451600089282 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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