If people go to live in another country, they should then follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern era, the issue of the following the customs and traditions in new countries has become highly controversial. There are those who say that people who moved to new countries should live with the new countries’ cultures, however, others believe that it should not. In this essay, I will examine both side of the arguments and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that the public should follow the new country’s unique cultures. There is an idiom “If you go to Rome, you should follow Rome’s legal.” Perhaps the main reasons why people are in favor of this phenomenon is because to live in society is to share with people, not alone. It is so meaningful discussion. This is mainly because society is made of people’s cultures, traditions, and customs. If new people assert their cultures and thoughts, they will experience social isolation among the citizens.
Despite, these challenge, it must be said there are several arguments against this. The century of 21 is universial society and it means that society includes diversity. To follow the new country’s customs and traditions unconditionally is outdated. People should keep their native cultures and traditions everywhere. For instance, in the case of the United States, the USA has called “Melting Pot.” It means that there were various cultures together in one country, and they generated unique cultures with each cultures. If people only comply with the new country’s culture, they will forget their self-esteem.
In conclusion, it is clear that this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I strongly disagree with the given question. Just, to follow some countries’ traditions and customs will damage on people’s diversity. If people live in new country with their original cultures, they will be able to produce their new cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38562091503 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99468572554 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9723750239 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296770978104 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975170021731 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558878884203 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202141860489 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00812610383331 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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