Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others believe there are other factors.
different forms of arts play an important role in every individual’s life. Some believe that the money, which is utilizing on those different forms of arts by the government, is totally useless and it would be much better to invest this on another activities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the given statement as this money could be used to initiate new projects.
one evident reason is that, nowadays most of the cities are facing the issues related to increase in pollution day-by-day. And the main reason behind this is heavy usage of personal vehicles. if government spend this money for launching the metro trains project, so that people have much access on public vehicles. it helps to reduce the pollution. In addition to this, it would also increase the job opportunities for new applicants.
another reason is that, government of India invested over 3000 crore for building statue of unity just for the reasons of making a source of tourists attraction and to break the world record of tallest building. if this money was used for embarking the new business. Then it would be helpful for introducing new jobs to the residents and to run import and export business with different countries, which could be advantageous for developing India’s economy.
To conclude, however, different forms of arts are playing crucial role in our daily life. But, there are other things which are necessary for us in order to enjoy the real sense of life. High unemployment ratio is one of the major concern in these days. so, it is government’s prime responsibility to invent money for mitigating this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84659501356 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6967454577 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571128137745 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184762060022 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296973156287 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0347787111985 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206986134832 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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