Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.
Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
after completing the officer hours and even on public holidays, some employers require to be competent in touch with their employees. In my opinion, while this is beneficial thing for the organizations but having devastating effect on employees health and relation with society.
Firstly, nowadays, due to higher workloads on companies, some of the employers are forced to get in connect with their staff members. As a result, they could able to receive updates time-to-time. And if an organization finish his assignment on time, which it receives from different from company, would help it to make the strong relation.
however, this also holds some negative impacts on workers health. after spending a specific number of hours under an organization, each employee wants to get involve himself in some kind of physical activity. So that he could feel some relaxations and able to entertain himself for a while. Otherwise, he would be effected by depression or other related issues.
Another disadvantage is that, it could effect the relation of employee with their family members and rest of the people in society. if an employee is in touch with his boss for all the time. Then, he could not able to give some essential time to his family members and other persons, who keep an important place in his life. this would leads to isolation in the society. In addition to this, this would be the one main reason behinds the number of divorce cases increased in these days.
To conclude, however this would be much fruitful for an organization but it also carries some negative points, which could not be neglected just for the profit of an organization. As dwelling with better living standards is fundamental right of every individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: After
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...just for the profit of an organization. As dwelling with better living standards i...
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...amental right of every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09342560554 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73068483123 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1602776261 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199613816378 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653992843415 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463564883647 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114777323702 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359711647315 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.