Improving technology has been changing the world, accordingly, this improvement affects our lives in many ways. However, from my point of view, such development technology definitely has a negative impact as well as benefits.
Above all, modern technology helps people to communicate with each other without any limitation. For example, people could talk or see their families or friends by using a cellphone or computer with a global network system at any time and no matter where they live.
Apart from making communication, recent technology can save people's lives in case of an emergency. Obviously, many diseases can be cured by modern tools and medicines which doctors use to treat patients like heart attack, stroke or accident, also people could learn many things from websites or educational applications throughout the Internet.
On the other hand, misuse of technology could lead individuals to forget about their roots in the future. As an illustration, young people and children regularly use the internet and social media as a habit and they see other people lives and lifestyle like what they eat, drink or wear so that they start to imitate other people behaviors or cultures and after while they can not remember their traditional manner.
In conclusion, although the new achievement in technology has side effects on society and people's lifestyle, in my opinion, technology could help individuals to improve their relationship with other cultures around the world and learn more about the civilization.
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- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...odern tools and medicines which doctors use to treat patients like heart attack, st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36099585062 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82555248338 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630705394191 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2873781669 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.555555556 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165167392553 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730058040264 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361425562179 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933172739954 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410043303146 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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