Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children are happier than adults.
People are happy when things go by their way. There is this state of joy which brings smile on face and enjoy their moment. Everyone are sometimes happy and sometimes sad. I agree that children are more happier than adults. Why the children are more happier than adults? The answer to this question is being delved deeper in the subsequent paragraphs.
The children are naive, without deceit unlike adults. Children share happiness with each other. The games they play are deceitless. Contrary to this, adults mostly try to be happy sometimes by hardworking or by deceitful practices. Sometimes mundane life of an adult can limit the happiness. The enjoyment or happiness achieved in adults is limited compared to kids. If a child is given a toy, from that very moment of getting that toy the happiness begins. That kid will play with that toy until it breaks or until he gets tired and fall asleep. Whereas, if we compare this joy with most of the adults, they seem to be happy for few hours, or atmost a day. This duration of happiness is more in case of children.
Adults being mature persons sometimes set their goals very high, sometimes unachievable. My personal example of my friends being happy is perfect one, demonstrating varying happiness. Back when studying for our college exams, some friends were expecting a perfect score and some of my friends were just expecting to pass. Later after the exam when the results were announced, the friends which were optimistic passed and were happy. Moreover, other few of my friends despite being scoring good grades they were sad that they couldn't achieve a perfect score. So, this example shows that setting goals which are practically impossible to achieve might not end up in happiness.
In the end, the mundane life of adults and their complexities in thinking limits their happiness. Whereas children being naive, free from complexities of this world are more than happy. As the children are more happier than adults, adults must try to be with children or be like children for sometime to seek happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ometimes sad. I agree that children are more happier than adults. Why the children are more ...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ppier than adults. Why the children are more happier than adults? The answer to this questio...
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Line 9, column 526, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ing good grades they were sad that they couldnt achieve a perfect score. So, this examp...
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Line 13, column 207, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...re more than happy. As the children are more happier than adults, adults must try to be with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45685878757 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5690108052 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.16 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.45110844103 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15652973102 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614684214884 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111296573171 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125437278546 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821831473387 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.