The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper in Masontown:
“If we want to save money on municipal garbage disposal fees, we need to encourage our residents to recycle more. Late last year, our neighboring town, Hayesworth, passed a law requiring that all households recycle paper and glass, or pay a fine. Since that time, Hayesworth has seen its garbage disposal costs significantly decrease. If we implemented an advertising campaign encouraging our residents to recycle, Masontown would also save money on disposal of its waste.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The given piece of letter is written by author to the editor of local newspaper in masontown.The authorhas written about saving the money in dispposal cost of garbage and provides example of the neighbouring town that implementing this thing in there town resulted in to low disposal cost and implementing such program in mansontown would result in to same.But at first the author seems to be convincing but as we move on further author makes number of dubious assumptions.So there results a need of evaluating the authors saying.The conclusion of author cannot be considered as viable unless and untill the analyzation is done.Number of questions will arouse on the dubious statement provided by author which needs to be answered by the author then only the conclusion will be considered as feasible one.
First of all author putforth's the ideas of saving money on muncipal garbage disposal fees and makes a statement that we need to encourage the residents to recycle more.Here author must provide the statistical data about the dispposal costs for muncipal corporation so that it can be judged whetehr it is actually to more or is somewhat ok relating to the population.There might be the case that just encouraging will not work as many might dont know where to recycle the garbage?.There can also be the case that resident actually recycle maximum even though the left one which cannot be recycled is thrown as garbage and passed on to the muncipal corporation resulting in huge disposable garbage?.Author must provide answers to these questions and must provide solid evidences to his statement then only the statements willbe considered as viable one.
Further author gives example of the neighbouring town hayesworth that they passed a rule of recycling the paper and glass products or will be fined and this resulted in low garbage accumulation in that city and frther resulted in low disposal costs.Here author must provide the figurative proofs that the garbage disposal before implementing the law and after implementing the law.Such proof can provide strength to the statements provided by author.But there can be the case also that coincidentally the implementing law and there might be less generation of garbage itself by the people of hayesworth?.This would result in no more recycling done by the residents even by implementing the law. So in order to consider the statement real the other must provide required data and answer the quastion that aroused or providing the support to his statements would itself overcome the questions aroused.
Finally author makes a conclusion that if we implement same policy and make a advertidement camapaign encouraging to recycle more to our residents ourtown will also save money on disposal of its waste.This conclusion cannot be considered as possible unless author provides answer to the qustions and moreevidences.The people in hayesworth might have recyled by the fear of fine but in masontown what if people are not afraid of the fine and pay no attention to the camapaigns of muncipal corporation?
Author must provide more evidences for making his conclusion considerabel.There must be cogency in the thoughts of author and the statements provided by the author.Detail evidence and proofs of surveying supported with statistical data and answering the aroused question will result in to viable conclusuion of author.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The given piece of letter is written by author to the editor of local newspaper in masontown.The authorhas written about saving the money in dispposal cost of garbage and provides example of the neighbouring town that implementing this thing in there town resulted in to low disposal cost and implementing such program in mansontown would result in to same.But at first the author seems to be convincing but as we move on further author makes number of dubious assumptions.So there results a need of
Error: mansontown Suggestion: mansion
Error: authorhas Suggestion: authors
Error: neighbouring Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dispposal Suggestion: disposal
Error: masontown Suggestion: mason own
Sentence: evaluating the authors saying.The conclusion of author cannot be considered as viable unless and untill the analyzation is done.Number of questions will arouse on the dubious statement provided by author which needs to be answered by the author then only the conclusion will be considered as feasible one.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Error: analyzation Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: First of all author putforth's the ideas of saving money on muncipal garbage disposal fees and makes a statement that we need to encourage the residents to recycle more.Here author must provide the statistical data about the dispposal costs for muncipal corporation so that it can be judged whetehr it is actually to more or is somewhat ok relating to the population.There might be the case that just encouraging will not work as many might dont know where to recycle the garbage?.There can also be
Error: whetehr Suggestion: whether
Error: dont Suggestion: don
Error: ok Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dispposal Suggestion: disposal
Error: muncipal Suggestion: municipal
Sentence: the case that resident actually recycle maximum even though the left one which cannot be recycled is thrown as garbage and passed on to the muncipal corporation resulting in huge disposable garbage?.Author must provide answers to these questions and must provide solid evidences to his statement then only the statements willbe considered as viable one.
Error: willbe Suggestion: wile
Error: muncipal Suggestion: municipal
Sentence: Further author gives example of the neighbouring town hayesworth that they passed a rule of recycling the paper and glass products or will be fined and this resulted in low garbage accumulation in that city and frther resulted in low disposal costs.Here author must provide the figurative proofs that the garbage disposal before implementing the law and after implementing the law.Such proof can provide strength to the statements provided by author.But there can be the case also that
Error: hayesworth Suggestion: have worth
Error: neighbouring Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: frther Suggestion: father
Sentence: coincidentally the implementing law and there might be less generation of garbage itself by the people of hayesworth?.This would result in no more recycling done by the residents even by implementing the law.
Error: hayesworth Suggestion: have worth
Error: coincidentally Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: So in order to consider the statement real the other must provide required data and answer the quastion that aroused or providing the support to his statements would itself overcome the questions aroused.
Error: quastion Suggestion: question
Sentence: Finally author makes a conclusion that if we implement same policy and make a advertidement camapaign encouraging to recycle more to our residents ourtown will also save money on disposal of its waste.This conclusion cannot be considered as possible unless author provides answer to the qustions and moreevidences.The people in hayesworth might have recyled by the fear of fine but in masontown what if people are not afraid of the fine and pay no attention to the camapaigns of muncipal corporation?
Error: hayesworth Suggestion: have worth
Error: ourtown Suggestion: town
Error: advertidement Suggestion: advertisement
Error: camapaigns Suggestion: campaigns
Error: qustions Suggestion: questions
Error: camapaign Suggestion: campaign
Error: masontown Suggestion: mason own
Error: muncipal Suggestion: municipal
Error: recyled Suggestion: recycled
Error: moreevidences Suggestion: more evidences
Sentence: Author must provide more evidences for making his conclusion considerabel.There must be cogency in the thoughts of author and the statements provided by the author.Detail evidence and proofs of surveying supported with statistical data and answering the aroused question will result in to viable conclusuion of author.
Error: considerabel Suggestion: considerable
Error: cogency Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: conclusuion Suggestion: conclusion
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 26 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 561 350
No. of Characters: 2809 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.867 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.007 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.76 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 213 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 154 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 113 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 77 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 62.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.281 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.467 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.765 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Line 1, column 2672, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'recycling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: recycling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, incidentally, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 12.9520958084 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 11.1786427146 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 55.5748502994 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 542.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23062730627 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10640677876 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416974169742 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 902.7 705.55239521 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 135.0 22.8473053892 591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7377601425 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 708.75 119.503703932 593% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 135.5 23.324526521 581% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.25 5.70786347227 337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.25449101796 476% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164409361879 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117621637941 0.0743258471296 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276607996153 0.0701772020484 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164409361879 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 71.0 14.3799401198 494% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -74.01 48.3550499002 -153% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.1628742515 269% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 57.1 12.197005988 468% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.54 8.32208582834 163% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 12.3882235529 460% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.0 11.1389221557 503% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.9071856287 479% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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