Claim: An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Reason: When assessing the morality of an action, the results of the action are more important than the intent of the person or people performing the action.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
One must agree or disagree with the given claim and reason.I agree with the give claim that the action is good if good results more for the action than that of bad.This cases can be seen nowdays in our surrounding too.Mostly prople judge through the intension of the actions commited by the people,but that should not be the case.As one might be doing something wrong for making something right,so he cannot be judged as a bad kind of person as he is commiting something morally bad.So it is important to judge people from the results of the action taken even if the action is morally wrong wait for its results and then the assessment should be done whether the person's action is good or bad. A person might be doing morally wrong but his intention is not of doing that,so he cannot be judged wrong.Before making the judgement one must assess the results of his good whether it is good or bad then only the conclusion should be made.He might be doing something wrong in order to make something right.Forexample a son knows her mother verywell that she is kind of dellrium,being an overthinker and obsessed about her family and if son gets to know something bad news about her family and he lies to his mother which is morally wrong but this lieing could keep his mother away from tension overthinking so the son cannot be called as a bad one because he lied to his mother the result of the action should be seen and assessed.Thus the assessment should be done on the results than that of intent of that person. Denying for social responsibilities mainly the blood donation for example a child just got an accident is deficient withblood that is same as that of a person near to him so in urgencythe person denies donating his blood.Thus this doesnt make that person haughty or arrogant just because he denied for blood donation.One must go to profound study or deive to know the reason behind the denial.And then gets to know the person is suffering from blood cancer thats the reason he didn't donate the blood.If he would have donated the blood from influence of his surrounding the blood when passed on to the blood deficient people would have caused cancer too.So through this merely the amount of goodness should be seen that just that of dennial for sonation and then assessment should be done. We can see a tonnes of example in such kind of cases that a person is judged as wrong from his action but he takes that action for something good purpose.For example many hindu temples prohibit entry of people eating non-vegeterian food so person that might have eaten nonveg food and is taken to temple by his family denial to enter temple is resulted in to that person is morally bad.But the need is tostudy the reason why he did this is more important he actually prevented disturbing the pureness of temple and was able to follow the rule bade bu the religious puritans.So many times it is even quoted that "the lie by which a personsdestructed house is set in good manner is not considered as a lie" which implies that even if lieying is morally bad but something good happens by lieying that lie is not considered as a lie. So we can say that the actions should not be judged from the intentof the people but from the assessment of goodness or badness of that action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2698.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59625212947 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5440955307 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388415672913 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 117.0 23.0359550562 508% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 261.293704478 60.3974514979 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 539.6 118.986275619 453% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 117.4 23.4991977007 500% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2 5.21951772744 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303260693879 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218116497047 0.0831039109588 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1191275201 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303260693879 0.150359130593 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.9 14.1392134831 417% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.36 48.8420337079 -62% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 46.6 12.1743820225 383% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.26 8.38706741573 146% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 11.8971910112 429% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 48.8 11.2143820225 435% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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