Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
Although some people believe that computers have made life more complicated and stressful, I think computers have made positive influence to our life and make it easier in general for two compelling reason, which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with, computer safes plenty of our time. A lot of processes, tasks and even jobs have become automatically computing algorithms due to contemporary processors. For instance, in work of architect there are some necessary computer programs, which allow working on plans of several floors, facades and selections at the same time and each draft depends on other drafts; more over, 3d model is created automatically by drafts. It is mean that nowadays architect spend less time on a project then it was the decade ago, and also avoid discrepancies between drafts. That may represent а good illustration of how computers improve life of architects.
Second reason, computers have made our life more mobile. We don't need as many things as it was before. Heavy books become weightless files, different instruments and utensils become computer programs, emails replace necessity of face to face meetings. We can be wherever with our laptop, we are ready to continue our work on some assignment in almost every case. I would like to support this idea with an example of my story. When I was study on a first course I was living quite far from university, and everyday I had to spend almost an hour in train to reach my destination. I was studying architecture and a lot of drafts i was doing in train, from work on small property houses to the project of huge apartment building.
In my opinion, computer programs in general give us lots of voluble opportunities, save necessary documents and make a life easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in general, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98653198653 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80594028987 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5638427908 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318063248078 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104873584199 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145788983196 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219393182406 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151028646967 0.0645574589148 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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