You work a part-time job in a company, and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the full-time position of Business development executive that I have recently seen in an advertisement.
I have been working with your company for 11 months now and I was doing a bachelor's degree in business administration and I have just finished it last month. Thus, I am able to work full time and I will be adequate for this position because I have gained vast experience by working here under Mr. John kelly.
I am planning to do a master's degree in business and marketing next semester, which will not affect my current working schedule because I can attend classes on weekends. Additionally, I would strive to achieve a higher position in the organization.
I have learned several skills in marketing while working here so my experience and studies in the relevant field can help in the overall development of the company. Moreover, I can advise in marketing strategies to increase the sales of the organization.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Priyanka Tuli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve recently seen in an advertisement. I have been working with your company fo...
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Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... it last month. Thus, I am able to work full time and I will be adequate for this positio...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by working here under Mr. John kelly. I am planning to do a masters degree in ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher position in the organization. I have learned several skills in marketi...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Priyanka Tuli
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01319005138 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9653975094 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175513030183 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646850753567 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476240316738 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859750282752 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562628906559 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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