People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce longer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, medical advancements prolonged the life of common man. Presently, masses live longer as well as work for extended period of time that was unimaginable in the past decade. I fully agree with the notion, as development of the nation happens with the number of working hands it has.
There are multifarious points to endorse the statement. First and foremost, advancement in the age is the huge barrier in the country development. To be specific, younger gets older is the true fact of life, so, working capacity lowers as age advances. In regards to this, certain medicinal researches make life prolonged and enhance the vital capacity of humans today. Furthermore, certain steroids or other medical treatment makes human body energetic that results into working for longer hours. To demonstrate, energy drinks such as red bull, monster are taken to upsurge the work power and increase the productivity. However, treatment of certain deadly diseases such as cancer, genetic disorders are searched that is the greatest blessing to the humanity. Henceforth, sufferings relating to these diseases now cured to some extent.
Further emphasizing, the greediness to earn money throughout the life cycle in order to fulfill all desires and raise standard of living by the folks is another factor to work longer. To illustrate, some cunning companies allured people by giving exciting offers of making more money and inversely increases their own profit. As a result, employees work for twelve hours and start taking certain medicinal products to increase their work power. Moreover, sometimes people like to work until they are sound to work due to their own desire to remain in the workforce. For instance, in developed countries like America, people over the age of 60’s work due to their personal preference.
To recapitulate, medical services is the boom to this century that help folks to stay healthy and contribute to the success of the nation. Hence, this advancement imposes certain hinderances that should be ignored to live a prosperous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25525525526 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7337852311 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3906283442 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129902352347 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356376149501 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304595017778 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741942507263 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141614723227 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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