You have a full-time job and also doing a part time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• Describe the situation
• Explain why you cannot continue at this time
• Say what action you would like to take
Write atleast 150words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear …………………,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to notify you that I shall not be able to continue my evening course in French language for a few months. Let me explain my situation in detail.
I am working as an assistant manager in IDFC Mutual fund. Since, the organisation has launched a New Fund Offer from 24th September till 30th September, there is a lot of inflow of applications from the customers investing a huge amount of funds in the new schemes. Not only the applications have to be processed but also the high value cheques have to be banked on the same day.
My senior expects me to work for extra hours in office during this time without any faults and flaws. Investor applications are processed accurately; the cheques are banked as well as the funds are received in our pool account without any errors. As a result, I reach home at 10 pm so I shall not be able to attend my classes from 6 to 7 pm. Moreover, after reaching home I am totally exhausted and I cannot focus on my studies and assignment.
I hope you will consider my circumstances and permit me to continue my course and studies in future. Kindly adjust my fees for next available group.
Your corporation will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reaching home I am totally exhausted and I cannot focus on my studies and assignm...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...it me to continue my course and studies in future. Kindly adjust my fees for next availab...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6347826087 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69402475419 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9406614961 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161082694893 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534302119903 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575471066629 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963997591635 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059432681444 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.