The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge. The public libraries should only focus in lending books to people rather than squandering their cost an limited resources in providing hi-tech media such as computer software’s, DVDs and CDs. In my opinion, I strongly agree that libraries should include latest technological means of providing knowledge
The installation of technology is very expensive and the traditional libraries cannot afford such huge investment on the same. Moreover, libraries are meant to provide the ambience and surrounding that motivate people to read books and gain knowledge, with the availability of videos and audios will distract the mind of people and the overall objective of the library will be lost.
Despite of some of the few negatives attached to having the latest technology in libraries, the idea that they are useless and do no provide knowledge is completely preposterous as CDs and DVDs do not occupy much of shelf space than the books. The use of latest media applications like computer software and and documentaries will help people to gain the understanding about the various aspects with the use of videos and pictures, and there is a justified verbalisation that people tend to remember the videos and images for a longer period of time rather than mugging up the content from books. Furthermore, individuals can read novels and books on laptops and computers at the comfort of their home or while travelling and will not be required to carry heavy books.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the libraries should enable them with advanced technology as this will increase their significance and needs in the society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'include the latest'.
Suggestion: include the latest
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Suggestion: and
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25830258303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96323518965 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.609237566 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.571428571 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7142857143 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320418670527 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127421184945 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844882342695 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188415637944 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736598825924 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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