A lot of people spend a major part of their adult like at work so job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness what are the main factors that contribute to job satisfaction? what are the possible solution for people who are unsatisfied with their job?
People have been debating the principles of job satisfaction.While some hold the view that absolutely young Persons spend a lot of time at work and happiness for them are very important, the other highly insist that it's not necessary. According to my opinion there are main factors and satisfactions to workers to find best job satisfaction and happiness.
Firstly the high salary plays an important role in job categorises. actually the people who live in modern society would like to earn high rate of money to use luxury life facilities, ambiens and even save money for rest of their life. For example the most of persons with educational experiences whom have University degree and experts CV have a spectacular opportunities to find gorgeous job situations like free insurance , bonus scheme, Comprehensive Healthcare provision and even subsidized Canteen. As a result these items help all employers to feel tranquil and Cozy about the future financial supporting. That led to they decrease their concentration and morality for doing routine jobs. In addition coworkers are another main factors in job locations. actually when the person work with humours and polite persons, feel the better than impolite areas. some of the bosses dedicate many things to make friendly situation.
hours for young persons because long job hours leded to flourish stress and unflexibilities among them since 1990. although the workers did not extra activities and they were working in boring location every day, today there are many gyms and pools with high tech gadgets in offices and companies to decrease negative work effects. It's very worst when everything has improved through bosses young people expect government helped to find best job situation.In consequences they can share many things with each other and help them about various problem.
secondly long job hours lead to increase stress and unflexibilities among workers since 1990. Although some ersons believe that the employers dud not extra activities and leusure time so they were working in boring location every day, today there are many gyms and yoga course with high tech gadgets in offices and vompanies to drop negative work effects. Thesedays there are many solutions to help every one to rich job happiness. One of them is changing job. For instance if they were unhappy, ask new job from Job Association which established 10 years ago. In Addition the person should to change own work offices with simple things like Bamboo plans, colorful desk , listening light music and having healthy meal instead of junk foods and drinks. when workers have been changing their negative job affects everything will happiest than the past.
In conclusion the government bosses and workers have to help each other to rich High rate of brain, body and mental health when they are up to ears at hard job hours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17849462366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63326189383 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5502558963 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283174849646 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835386029014 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528255928921 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167261348665 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845783283267 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.