The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced
The diagram reveals how to produce milk and milky items.
A quick look at pictures is quite enough to make it clear that the entire procedure accomplish within five stages which is further divided into short steps from gaining milk through cows and ending with sending milk products to supermarkets or in other sweatshops.
First of all,farmers foster cows who mainly eat grasses to increase thier milk.After that taking milk from cows is essential step in this process that can be done by labours at most two time a day with the help of machines.As soon as collecting milk is complete,it must be store in refrigeration or either transport to dairy in daily delivery milk tanker.Therafter in dairy workers produce all possible food dishes which make from milk only such as cheese,cream and butter for consumers.During these cuisine perparing work some amount of milk is used in order to pasteurized and packaged as well.Finally,this packaged milk send into supermarkets and other shops for customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , farmers
... or in other sweatshops. First of all,farmers foster cows who mainly eat grasses to i...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...inly eat grasses to increase thier milk.After that taking milk from cows is essential...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inly eat grasses to increase thier milk.After that taking milk from cows is essential...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...wo time a day with the help of machines.As soon as collecting milk is complete,it ...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...s.As soon as collecting milk is complete,it must be store in refrigeration or eithe...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therafter
... to dairy in daily delivery milk tanker.Therafter in dairy workers produce all possible f...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cream
...which make from milk only such as cheese,cream and butter for consumers.During these c...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: During
...s cheese,cream and butter for consumers.During these cuisine perparing work some amoun...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this cuisine' or 'these cuisines'?
Suggestion: this cuisine; these cuisines
...e,cream and butter for consumers.During these cuisine perparing work some amount of milk is u...
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Line 5, column 597, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...der to pasteurized and packaged as well.Finally,this packaged milk send into supermarke...
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Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...pasteurized and packaged as well.Finally,this packaged milk send into supermarkets an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, look, so, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12804878049 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01584034398 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.640576514 43.030603864 599% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.333333333 112.824112599 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 22.9334400587 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.3333333333 5.23603664747 369% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265111860122 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193269777819 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464165686391 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193269777819 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464165686391 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.2329268293 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 61.2550243902 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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