The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month

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The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

The examination of most popular online activities by adult internet users through july in Slovakia is done with the aid of horizontal bar graph. Units measurement is in percentum.

A quick glance at column chart is quite enough to make it clear that the majority of both feminine and masculine are using email. However, females are also equally fascinating towards text or instant messaging.

In the analisation of females, email is become a top priority with 89%. Text or instant messaging is at second position with roughly four fifth. Similarity is seen in the proportion of internet banking and social networking which is 79%. Surprisingly, health research, streaming video, online education and job hunting are under three fifth.

In comparison, with women, in case of males, utilisation of email and text or instant messaging are two first preferences with analogous percentage just above four fifth. iternet banking and social networking are stood at second and third rank with 71 and 69 per cent. The less interest is shown in health research, online education and job hunting by the males.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'fifth' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fifths'.
Suggestion: fifths
...ucation and job hunting are under three fifth. In comparison, with women, in case ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'fifth' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fifths'.
Suggestion: fifths
...th analogous percentage just above four fifth. iternet banking and social networking ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Iternet
...ogous percentage just above four fifth. iternet banking and social networking are stood...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18994413408 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71689940903 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.889407724 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104829692711 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035373765965 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529775417608 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692864333778 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581447290866 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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