Some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In modern times, the issue of healthcare is becoming increasingly controversial. Some people think that public health should be the government responsibility however, others believe that people have to be careful about their health. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people believe that public health should be one of the government preferences. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because many people cannot afford health insurance expenses which means they cannot take care of themselves or their children. Furthermore, people who are in this side of argument think that the government must eradicate anything can cause diseases to the nation. For example, if the government do not pay attention to what makes people sick, the epidemics will spread quickly. As a result of this, many problems will come out, such as health and economics problems.
On the other hand, there are those who believe that public health is the people's matter and not government's problem. They think that people have to be careful about what they eat and drink in their life because there are a lot of foods and drinks can affect their health negatively. For instance, the latest statistics indicate that a huge number of young people prefer unhealthy foods rather than healthy foods which can cause a lot of illnesses.
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both point views, I believe that public health must be paid attention by the government. Also they should educate the nation on how to be careful of their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56541266637 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3806017791 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468303562209 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166219971135 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133964247181 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306065601271 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118587063578 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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