Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable.
Write to a friend, who is a professional event planner. In your letter:
explain why the occasion is special
ask for her assistance
set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans
Dear Martha,
It is my pleasure to announce that we are celebrating 40th anniversary of my parents on 21st January 2020. We are planning to throw a grand party in their honour. However, we are clueless how to manage it and therefore, we need your help to turn the occasion into grand success.
Since they have completed 40 years together and still love each other as a recently married couple, all our family members have decided to appreciate their feelings. It is very important day of their life hence we have agreed upon that rather than arranging a normal get together that we usually do, this time around we would celebrate it in a different style.
As we know you are and expert in organising such events, we need your guidance and support in fulfilling our desire. Though we have agreed upon the activities we wish to include, we request you to guide and assist us in completing the event.
We understand that it would be difficult for you to take time out of your busy schedule at such a short notice. However, we would be grateful to you if you can do so.we can arrange a meeting at Rosy’s house to discuss our plan of action as per her and your convenience. As we know we are running out of time we wish to start it as early as possible.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
Love & regards,
Kutub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different style" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... this time around we would celebrate it in a different style. As we know you are and expert in ...
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Line 17, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...action as per her and your convenience. As we know we are running out of time we w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5875 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47824507711 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9523197596 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150615408787 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066396317739 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444263726116 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950759678881 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381799054374 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.