Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.
Write to the director of the school and request these documents.
Dear Mr. Morris,
I am writing this letter to request you the copies of my reports and assignments that I have submitted last year during my presentation skill course in Sydney at your esteemed institute.
My name is John Kudolski and have enrolled for the presentation skill weekend course which proved to be extremely beneficial for me to crack the interview for my new job. My new company has demanded to submit all the documents for the courses that I have mentioned in my résumé.
Would you kindly mail me the required copies on my email John.Kudolski@gmail.com so that I could furnish them the required documents on time. Hope you will consider my request and do the needful.
Thanks & Regards,
John Kudolski.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kudolski@gmail
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 621.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 122.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09016393443 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09118478243 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 178.2 290.88556701 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8047878232 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 4.34317383033 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235849576946 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113947096527 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113862686897 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195080033334 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135483652679 0.0580467560999 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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